This is the first initial draft of my trailer. While I have now changed it since then, this shows progression of my final product.
After getting audience feedback, it has become evident that the pacing and narrative of the trailer are too slow and has been too influenced by cause and effect.
This is bad as it feels more like a short film than a film trailer, and I will consider this when editing the next draft which should be up on the blog soon.
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